Refined Script

	Shot no.	Scene	Camera Shot	Description
	1	One	Establishing shot	Dance studio
	2	One	High angle and Pan	Dancing and turn
	3	One	Close up	As they turn
	4	One	Close up	As they turn
	5	One	Close up	As they turn
	6	One	Close up	As they turn
	7	One	Long shot	Thomas walking in
	8	One	Tracking	Thomas and Nina walking towards each other
	9	One	Two shot	Thomas and Nina hugging
	10	One	Long shot	Walking towards bags
	11	One	Point of view shot	Picking up bags
	12	One	Medium long shot	Leaving and door half closes
	13	One	Medium long shot (from mirror)	Buffy leaning down
	14	One	Medium close up	Buffy getting up
	15	One	Close up	Sees masked figure behind her
	16	One	Quick pan	Buffy turning around to see masked figure
	17	One	Medium shots cut to close up to extreme close up shots	Masked figure running towards her
	18	Two	Long shot	Kirby running
	19	Two	Extreme close up shot and Pan shot	Kirby’s face turning around
	20	Two	High angle shot	Kirby being dragged down slope
	21	Two	Close up shot	Kirby falls on ground and her head falls to one side
	22	Three	Pan shot	Tatum in bath
	23	Three	High angle shot	Tatum soaks her head in water
	24	Three	Long shot	Masked figure creeps in
	25	Three	High angle shot	Tatum lifts her head from water
	26	Three	Close up shot	Flash of knife
	27	Three	Reverse zoom and extreme close up shot	Tatum’s face
	28	Four	Medium shot	Kirby
	29	Four	Bird’s eye view/ high angle shot	Kirby
	30	Four	Canted angle/ slight high angle	Kirby
	31	Four	Medium shot	Kirby
	32	Four	Close up shot	Tatum
	33	Four	Extreme close up shot	Tatum
34		Four	High angle shot	Tatum
35		Four	Extreme close up shot	Tatum
36		Five	Extreme close up shot	Nina’s face looking left and right
37		Five	Close up shot	Nina looking up
38		Five	Low angle shot/ point of view shot	Light switches off
39		Five	Slight low angle shot	From outside- house lights switch off together
40		Five	Medium close up/ point of view shot	Villain peers under the table and sees Nina
41		Five	High angle pan	Blood on floor
42		Five	Low angle long shot	Villain walking on landing
43		Five	Medium shot	Buffy spinning in dance studio
44		Five	High angle shot	Flashing mask
45		Five	Medium shot	Flashing knife shadow
46		Five	High angle/ pan shot	Blood on floor
47		Five	Close up shot	Flashing lights whilst villain looking in mirror
48		Five	Low angle/ medium long shot	Nina getting attacked
49		Six	Medium shot	Nina walking towards window
50		Six	Pan shot	View of outside
51		Six	Medium shot	Villain standing behind Nina

We had to make many changes to the script as after the moment of disequilibirum, the shots were not fast enough. To solve this, we added seven more shots which varied from being low angle, high angle, medium and close up shots. We cut out the LIVE television broadcast scene as it required props to seem realistic and due to the shortage of time, it would not have been possible to editi the scene. Additionally, we decided that it was not necessary as it would be very clear from the trailer that Buffy has been murdered. Another scene we decided to cut out was the phonecall between Nina and the villain as we felt that the audience will be able to follow on from the fourth scene to the fifth scene.